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If you want I could help you edit you story’s. I love all of them and I hope I can’t help!!!

I hope no one has said this before: I’m here ready to claim Lorenzo as mine!!!! 

I am reading ALL of your boom xd 

I do professional proofreading and editing... I can be of help...

Hey

Why are all your books the same but with different plots ‍♀️‍♀️that shit is annoying it's like ready the same book over and over again I'm done with your books

If you need help editing I will be welling to help you out

See don't be afride to make mistakes everyone does. I did too. Keep writing! 

The way your stories are written is very hard to read. I'm not saying they are bad, just hard to understand. They need some editing. It is hard to see whow spoke if it goes like: "No. I said". Your quotations seem to drift alot. Try putting conversation on a different line. Like: 
          "What?"
          "Yes."
          Add a bit more detail. You don't have to rush the story. I'm sure more people would enjoy your stories if they didn't have to correct or think about what your trying to get across. They're really interesting stories, they just need a little cleaning up.

Can I make you a cover? You wouldn't need to use it... I just want to make you one. 
          I have a book cover maker, so you can look at that to have a look at my work. 
          -Lily