plunkey

Hey guys. I'll be going on around a 2 week hiatus, so all critiques I have will be put on hold till then. I'll be making a library filled with these obligations so I can get to them at a later time.

plunkey

Going to make some even further deep POV edits to my novel (mostly dialogue). Changing a lot of the proper nouns used to he/she in two person exchanges, or eliminating them entirely. 
          
          I just posted Tatiana's latest chapter, so hopefully this will be all fine and dandy up until the point the edits are done.

TheBrightMoonlight

Hi! Thank you for adding me to your Potential Reads list! I really, really appreciate the support. Also, you seem like a really interesting person!<3<3

TheBrightMoonlight

I hope so too. :)
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plunkey

@TheBrightMoonlight 
            
            Haha, thanks so much. I plan on checking out your story quite soon. I hope to enjoy it!
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plunkey

Making a series of deep pov edits to my chapters. A lot of the pronouns will be replaced with either more 'show' or just replaced with 'she' or something else. (Although, for stylistic preference, some will remain should the POV dictate it. If a princess is acting 'princessy', she'll be referred to as a princess.)
          
          These changes are superficial, and will not affect the current readership. Just that the style might be changed some for later chapters.

plunkey

So we finally got the first glimpse of that naval battle guys. It wasn't much in Ulion's latest chapter, but it's definitely the beginning.
          
          Additionally, to anyone reading my story, Ulion and Tatiana are now of mixed descent. In addition, Marius is also  now confirmed to be Huslani. These are not big spoilers, so do not worry. I'd like to think the world of my novel is pretty diverse, what with all the different powers and what not.
          
          However, I 'am' writing characters first, not labels. So no worries. :-]
          
          Good reading, guys!