pepsizeroluvr

HEY GUYS. i promise im gonna keep writing colorfully grey ! im just caught up in a bunch of work lately - but i am halfway through writing the next chapter so! it will be out soon! 

atsumio

hello~ could you please check out my fanfiction about Yuri Plisetsky called "you again"? your feedback would mean the world to me! <3

atsumio

thank you!!
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pepsizeroluvr

@milanaxi Well, some constructive criticism would be; The story is very fast paced, and could use some details now and again. You could go a little more in depth with the characters, too. Also, Yuri is quite OOC in your fanfiction. Though, I have to admit, the way you wrote him in this story is extremely adorable. 
            
            Now for the positives. It has a lot of potential, and I really like the general idea of the story, and I just love Ella. I think that if you keep writing, everything will come together in the end. PLUS your writing style is quite nice!
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