pena-fajar

After just over a year and quite a few edits, the final version of Internal's first book, Viperpath, is at long last FINISHED! 
          	
          	Thank you all who'd stuck with me for this breathtaking ride (and that's putting it mildly). Can't thank you all enough for your insightful and incisive feedbacks, and I sincerely hope you've enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it!
          	
          	See y'all in the next title!
          	
          	-Pena

Tristan639

Hi pena I saw your post on my conversations page and I just wanted to say thank you and yes I do need some tips and help because I’m making a book and I don’t have a lot of experience with creating novels. I read some of your books and I thought they were pretty good.
          
          Americas psycho 
          Tristan
          I’m a menace to society 

pena-fajar

@ Tristan639  Good to know ^ Which of my books have you read, btw? And what kind of tips do you feel you need?
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pena-fajar

After just over a year and quite a few edits, the final version of Internal's first book, Viperpath, is at long last FINISHED! 
          
          Thank you all who'd stuck with me for this breathtaking ride (and that's putting it mildly). Can't thank you all enough for your insightful and incisive feedbacks, and I sincerely hope you've enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it!
          
          See y'all in the next title!
          
          -Pena

Writer_Sama12

Hoiiii how u been ^^

Writer_Sama12

@pena-fajar alrighty sounds good! Hope to see your feedback on my new version as well! I really wanna fix the mistakes I made a lot in my old story so a lot of feedback is appreciated ^^. The new version is "Surviving This Forsaken World" btw. 
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pena-fajar

Hello all.
          
          After a series of feedbacks, I've come to the conclusion that a chapter's separation into three parts may have been uncalled for. Nor, from experience, would such a thing be found in published works.
          
          As such, I decided to readjust the chapters of Internal: Viperpath from scratch into just one part. Feel more workable that way too, considering that most readers would be on their phones and that longer chapters might turn them off (looking at you @Torkuda).
          
          For those readers that's been sticking around despite this odd format, I can only thank you all and apologize if that had been a source of inconvenience. Meanwhile, for those still trying to catch up, no worries- this change won't be reaching your currently-read parts anytime soon; you might still enjoy the tale and no probs. Just know that it's gonna get JUST a little different when next you take a peek.
          
          Ranted long enough, have I? Cheers ^
          
          Pena

pena-fajar

@Writer_Sama12  You're welcome. Hope you'll continue to enjoy them chapters ^
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Writer_Sama12

@pena-fajar I'm a little late but thanks for the announcement to let us know ^^
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Frozefas

@pena-fajar Ha- surprised you didn't mention me here either since I'm always splitting chapters into 2 when I read Internal.
            
            Honestly I feel like the length of the current chapters is fine- but they shouldn't go over a 20min readcount if possible, especially near the beginning where people are trying to ease into the story.
            
            But yeah up to you of course, I'd be fine with the change.
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ShuchenX

Hi, just to pop by and say thanks for reading my cliche compilation book (using the word 'book' very lightly)! Also btw I'm your 200th follower lol. Have a good day/night :)

pena-fajar

@ShuchenX  ty ^ hope you'll continue to enjoy the coming chapters
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ShuchenX

@pena-fajar hey, just read the first few chapters. really love ur writing btw <3
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ShuchenX

@pena-fajar sure, will do ;)
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pena-fajar

Yo. Been a while.
          
          Gonna share some possible titles for the Internal installments (I'll leave y'all to guess which title tells what- no spoilers) ^
          
          The titles are:
          -Viperpath
          -Dragonpath
          -Wolfpath
          -Lionpath
          
          Cheers~
          
          -P. F.-

Frozefas

@pena-fajar Ohhh. My guesses are- Viperpath for Mira of course, DragonPath for Urdin or Idris, Wolfpath for Zal, and Lionpath for Vestra?
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