peejay2066

I think y'all will be wondering who the stranger is, I'm chapter five of "heart made of steel"

Jonnywaita

I think I got some feedback or else some advice for you pal concerning Heart Made Of Steel

Jonnywaita

I beg to differ because when I checked your conversations appear in prose form. @Jonnywaita 
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peejay2066

@Jonnywaita That's how I do it, and the expression comes after the speech dear.
            Thanks tho
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Jonnywaita

I think when It comes to dialogues you should write like I have done below. @Jonnywaita
            
            "Hello" 
            
            "Oh hello there"
            
            "You kind of look familiar"
            
            ......
            
            As in each response should be in it's line, It helps making the story noticeable 
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