Dear author,
I wanted to share a constructive feedback if that’s okay with you. Maybe rewrite the story description to explain that there are two parts happening in this story. To be more transparent that Stella’s POVs and her story will be included leading into Athena and Deven’s story. This can help lessen the confusion with the readers trying to understand why you started out with Stella and her girlfriends. Right now, the description is deceiving us thinking that this story is mainly only about Athena and Deven. I say this with respect and hopefully that you will take this in consideration. Thank you.