@nonutramadan
Hey! So I just wanted to say that on my computer and phone it said you updated venturiantale oneshots, but it only still has six parts... Do you know what that means?
@Wafflelover102 Aha, yeah, I'm finishing up another chapter. Don't expect something too extravagant, though haha
Ah shoot Rae, its been a while (lol i doubt you remember me but ages ago I was Melzie_2312 or something like that)
Why are people still following me, I'm so inactive hah
If anyone reads this and has read any of my (crappy) stories, please do DM me areas that I can improve on. I've decided to start a new account for it. I already know a few things I can work on, so you can emphasise on it if you want.
1) Proof reading for errors. Tenses, spelling and sentence structures.
2) Realism of the characters' reactions. No rash and dumb responses. E.g. Letting a complete stranger stay in their house and kissing them on the first day.
3) Maturity of dialogues and monologues. Characters act their age and not attempt to be 'quirky' all the time.
4) Longer chapters and less paragraphing. Dropping the habit of paragraphing more to try make the story look longer.
You can also mention things that I should continue doing
Contemplating deleting my account. It's extremely embarrassing and my stories are shitty. If I do, I'll make another that consists of word vomit and fanfiction of other groups. Thoughts?
lmao I made a new account bc I didn't want to delete my shit so you could probably do that too
@raeraeisawesome it makes sense bro, i guess you could just make a different account and leave this one as a symbolic reminiscent of sorts to your 12 year old self
@legitimate_feces Yeah, but despite my fanfics being shitty and cringeworthy, I don't want to delete it. The account holds a lot of memories, good or bad. I've met some pretty cool people, and I was actually proud of what some of these stories have achieved. I want to give respect to my past self, you know? This account is barely mine anymore because I'm a completely different person. It was 12 year old Rae's and maybe it's best I leave it that way. That probably didn't make much sense, but I think it would have meant a great deal to me back then.
When I read broken and torn and the sequel or vise versa I literally threw my phone across the room and cried...
Hey Rae. I just gotta say, I absolutely LOVE your Broken and Torn story! Venturiantale is love! ❤️
This story inspired me to make
My own Venturiantale story! Thanks so much!
Stay creative! ❤️
@raeraeisawesome, Happy New Year! I have school next week and i just want to say... I loved your stories and They bring out the creativity you brought out from your imagination :D Have a good day!
I followed you! :D
Ignore the Haters and keep on writing!
And you are welcome!
Yoyoyo