mygosh6

@weathergirlwx it's hilarious and makes no sense

weathergirlwx

I finished reading what you had of Family first. It sounds really great, Firetail, and I really enjoyed it. Your use of dialogue really brings excitement to the moment; once I started reading it I was sort of stuck on it. My only suggestion is more detail about setting. When I read it , I did not know if it was night or day, nor if the wolves were in the desert or  a snowy mountain. Detail in setting will be great, and I can't wait for more!

mygosh6

As you may have been hearing from other writers, our school computers are being collected on Friday, May 22. I'm still going to continue writing, as I have my phone and a home computer, but I'm going to attempt to write Chapter 2 before school is out, because as soon as school is over, I have a camp to go to. I'll update hopefully at least to Chapter 10 by the end of the summer *shivers because doesn't want to think about the end of summer*