musicaltheatre24601

@Danielala I've been dancing for just over nine years too!:) 

Janetisqueen9888

musicaltheatre24601

Hi! So... thinking of changing my story a bit:) I've got great comments on the first chapter so I don't think I'll change that but from then onwards the comments aren't so good so I was wondering if anyone would like to help me change a few things? I'd like to appeal to as wide of an audience as possible:) Please post any changes or criticism or anything at all that will help me improve my book. Thanks!