mocha_macchi

Fun fact about the MC (or y/n) in Monster. She canonically sees herself as unattractive and ugly. However, she’s seen as uniquely pretty in everyone else’s point of view.

champion267364

@mocha_macchi I agree with you because the way she acts is exactly how I act in the beginning of monster where she wanted to die and things like that not really carrying on anything or she doesn't know why she fights that was literally me when I was extremely young I took a while for many people to tell me and show me that I was pretty and beautiful in my own rights and even now that I'm going to be 17 next month I still have issues with that to many people I look beautiful but to me I'm just a bland person so your story and that story hit me really hard because both characters act exactly like I do so again thank you for this book
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champion267364

Hi @mocha_macchi thank you so much for a new chapter I really appreciate it and the next chapter I swear I'm going to scream if our character decides to sacrifice herself for Connie's mother cuz again we all could tell she really does want to die oh that would be definitely a scary horrifying twist instead of Armin doing it

champion267364

And I'm also waiting for that damn blonde annoying b**** Yelena to tell the others our character only has a year to live I can't wait to see their reactions I'm pretty sure it's not going to be good and I'm also waiting for our characters old Commander from Marley to apologize to her but she just walks away to get the mission done and then possibly at the very end when he's about to sacrifice himself she salutes to him one last time
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champion267364

Because I think it would be eren in the better you hurt me song and I can handle this one would be Armin please don't think this is pressure or anything just two suggestions of the two songs that I think would work perfectly with this story this is my personal opinion

champion267364

@mocha_macchi hi sorry I didn't see that you responded thank you for responding I appreciate it
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mocha_macchi

Thank you so much for ur support! I’m glad u like the book. I heard of hazbin hotel but haven’t watched it since the show is not my cup of tea. I have heard the songs were good so I’ll give them a listen, thank u for the suggestion!
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champion267364

Hi @mocha_macchi I wanted to say thank you for doing another chapter of the story I appreciate it and what's your books it's amazing to read it more like listen to the audio and it's nice to know about the characters so we're going to know about the characters past I want to let you know there was two songs that resonated with me and for this book it's better you hurt me hazbin Hotel angel dust original by townfanatic And I can handle this one helluva boss loona original song by townfanatic I hope maybe you'll give it a shot and see what you think

SweetWeTDreamz

Hello .. I'm new when it comes to writing stories and I was wondering if anyone could read it? 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/394716417?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Female4Vegas
          
          
          It's my first time writing a story and I want to know if it's good or not so can anyone pleaseeee read itt

SweetWeTDreamz

@Batool_Chan SORRY FIR RESPONDING LATE I DIDNT GET THE NOTIFICATION BUT THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHH
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Batool_Chan

@ SweetWeTDreamz  I read it and it was so awesome (⁠≧⁠▽⁠≦⁠)!
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champion267364

Hi @mocha_macchi I'm sorry to bother you I just want to ask if you are possibly going to be doing another episode or chapter and I want to know how long will this possibly be going on for like how many more chapters do you have I hope I'm not being rude or prying into things you don't want to know yet or anything I just want to say again I really don't mean anything or to bug you with my constant messages to you anyway I just wanted to tell you my character's name for your book is kaiya Durand if you actually search that in Google and add like search it up and see what it means there's a few reasons between the first name and the last name that's all just want to ask that and I hope you have a good day or week I hope you are staying healthy and everything again sorry to bother you or drive you nuts I really didn't mean to if I did

MIMI_MUI

Hey 
          
          First, I would like to thank you for allowing me to translate your novel. Second, am I imagining things or have the views decreased? Well, I wanted to ask you about the cover. Should I put my own cover, that is, one I designed, or should I put this cover? ♡♡✨

mocha_macchi

Fun fact about the MC (or y/n) in Monster. She canonically sees herself as unattractive and ugly. However, she’s seen as uniquely pretty in everyone else’s point of view.

champion267364

@mocha_macchi I agree with you because the way she acts is exactly how I act in the beginning of monster where she wanted to die and things like that not really carrying on anything or she doesn't know why she fights that was literally me when I was extremely young I took a while for many people to tell me and show me that I was pretty and beautiful in my own rights and even now that I'm going to be 17 next month I still have issues with that to many people I look beautiful but to me I'm just a bland person so your story and that story hit me really hard because both characters act exactly like I do so again thank you for this book
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mocha_macchi

Welp, I failed my goal . It’s okay tho.

champion267364

@mocha_macchi hi It's OK, don't give up hope.Don't let anybody steal your joy.There were times you will Feel defeated and fall but then you will rise And make something or do something Great just get up and keep trying And again thank you very much For making attack on titan x mute Reader and possibly making her like girls or guys I appreciate it Thank you very much.This is just as good and Monster ❤️ In the words of my favorite character shiro Go be great
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TheMarineTitan42

@mocha_macchi 
            Take your time, you can’t rush art.
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Mendolaka

@mocha_macchi IT IS OKAY! U CAN DO IT, WE BELUVE IN U
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Thaziri-

Hi
          I apologize in advance for dropping this here 
          
          i'm a newby would you give my first one shot a try 
          
          I think you'd like this story: " flossy glossy drama in a sunny day  " by Thaziri- on Wattpad https://www.wattpad.com/story/387538159?utm_source=android&utm_medium=facebook_messenger&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Thaziri- 
          
          I apreciate positive criticism

Thaziri-

Thanks a lot,  you're the first one who took me suriosely ( well, beside my brothers hh)
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mocha_macchi

@Thaziri- Hey! Just read it. This is pretty good for your first one-shot. I would recommend using google docs to make drafts so you can fix any grammar mistakes before publishing. I recently started using google docs to write my drafts for my stories and it really helps me a lot with checking for grammar mistakes and adjusting the spacing. I hope this helps!
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