missKIA29

Heyyy.Please read my new and first book. I just published the "prologue" of my book "falling into your eyes" . Please feel free to criticize,comment , correct me where I'm wrong or even point out any part that needs editing . It will be greatly appreciated.Thank you in advance to those who are going to try out my book . (It's not an anime book)
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