
minesweeper0
I'm starting to wonder if having the first four Fundamental Force chapters be incredibly dense on breaking down science and what each of what the forces can do as a Quirk in combat but also just in general turned off an enormous potential readerbase. Like if I'd just written: 'Oh, here's [L/N], he can control reality and he's working for AFO, anyway, let's get straight into U. A.!' I genuinely think it would be way over 100k reads at this point. The first chapter has the lowest reader completion rate (that's not too odd, most stories do), doesn't immediately get into the MHA story, and most of the comments are just people saying they don't understand what's going on. Genderbent Todoroki definitely turned a lot of people away early on, I can understand that, but what can I say? I'm a simple man with simple needs. I'm not sure if being a villain insert would attract more or less people, I always liked reading villain stories more, but I'm not the majority of readers. Honestly though, I'm kinda glad in a way? I feel like it filtered out a lot of the children and annoying people from reading it. Not to sound too elitist, but I don't mind some MHA fans not reading it, if you get what I'm saying. I always want to add more science into the story whenever I can, and [L/N] breaking down Quirks. I really enjoying researching it myself and figuring things out. Hopefully we can see more of that soon.

JuantheChap
@minesweeper0 I personally liked the quirk explanation in the first couple chapters and thought it was a great introduction to this story. What drew me in the most was the idea of the insert being a villain instead of a hero student or someone who looks up to heroes since there are to many of those on Wattpad which gets repetitive. The start to this story was refreshing for me when I first read it.
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Ondrusa19
@minesweeper0 honestly i feel like my story has way more mature themes. Like i legit describe boiling homan bodies there and so far it stayed up. So i dont think that will be a problem but to be sure u can just save it in google docs or smt.
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Ondrusa19
@minesweeper0 brother man its simple. Because of the “for adults” tag u got there the book doesnt get recomended at all. Had the same issue with my story. I turned the tag off and I started getting 5X more views. Like I legit found your story by chance on someones reading list.
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