milovetimdrake

HI! ITS BEEN FOREVER. I kinda stopped writing and deleted Wattpad and never looked back. But every time I hear the teen idle song I think about how this is unfinished. SOOOOO. I may or may not be revamping it and posting it on A03!:) if you think this would be a good idea just tell me and I'll do it!

milovetimdrake

HI! ITS BEEN FOREVER. I kinda stopped writing and deleted Wattpad and never looked back. But every time I hear the teen idle song I think about how this is unfinished. SOOOOO. I may or may not be revamping it and posting it on A03!:) if you think this would be a good idea just tell me and I'll do it!

Meowthefluffy

I am now your mother friend.
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          Do not refuse.
          Resistance is futile.

milovetimdrake

@Meowthefluffy oH sorry, I just clicked from my notifications sorry ;;
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Meowthefluffy

I posted this on your page.
            Who do you THINK I was talking to.
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milovetimdrake

@Meowthefluffy oH are you talking to me or-
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milovetimdrake

Sorry for the wait, but the chapter of Idle Teen you've been waiting for is FINALLY out. Literally when I went to post it said something about be editing it somewhere else so I had to make a new chapter, copy and paste then do all the italics and bold stuff. Thanks for the patience, those who do read my story.

milovetimdrake

Okay, dialogue is the worst. All this fancy punctuation and paragraphs and having to say who is speaking all the time without accidentally switching to a different POVs randomly. Then there's the problem of spacing and I was taught you have to do a new paragraph for each dialoge so like that's how I'm writing it, but the chapter has A LOT OF DIALOGUE so it's taking a while. I'll write so much and it looks so long but then it's like, oh 800 words. Man, I hate dialogue, but I also love it cause I don't have to really go into detail about everything. 
          
          However, making dialogue in character is so hard. I tried making a irondad/spidyson moment where Tony jokes around but it NGL KINDA LOOKS LIKE STARKER BUT I HATE STARKER SO ITS NOT THAT. It's meant to be like you know when your parents make a joke then they say Jk and give a playful nudge and stuff? That's what I was trying to emulate. 
          
          Anyway off topic, I'm working hard on this next chapter and I'm going to spend all of my lunch time writing. :) Alright, if you have any requests of what I should include in my story or any other stories I should do, please feel free to tell me. No one likes ghost readers

milovetimdrake

@KarenTheSuitlady well I basically make a new paragraph for each line of dialogue when It switches characters. This is 1. So the reader and I don't mix up characters dialoge and 2. If people want to comment on a certain piece of dialoge they can.
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JackSapphire

@KarenTheSuitlady bro, ok wut u mean so I like legit measure my paragraphs and go "that looks like a reasonable size" dialogue and all. If u want an example I can type one out or u can check out one of my books(not Star Crossed Dreamers bc my bestie wrote that and we have different writing styles. His is more average book and mine is more novel like, ya kno? But like novice novel.)
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