-Paul-My-Dude-

@SierraFarted is a friend of mine whose been really wanting some feedback on her story “Seth the Killer”. She’s planning on rewriting it, and she wants to know everyone’s personal opinions on what she could do to improve it.
          
          You don’t have to read it, but if you want to, it would really be nice if you can put in your honest criticism. You don’t even have to read the whole thing if you don’t want to. She’s just looking for advice on her quality of writing.
          
          Thank you anyway. I hope your day goes well! 
          
          https://my.w.tt/RbCSH38utZ