meaganb93

Three updates to His Luna’s Betrayal just added! Multiple epilogues to follow ❤️

ViceCaptainAdair

Hi! I really like how you keep your stories short and interesting. I feel like I have read so many books I just want to have a good book that does not drag the story. You have that. The characters are also funny or not irritating. You can love them except the villain- I really think that is amazing. For "His Luna's Betrayal", I am not sure if there is a part of Meagan's memory where she initially called out to Alex. Just to make that scene stronger, I think adding a part where Meagan shows her initial belief that Alex  will save her no matter what- like Meagan saying Alex will find her or just sobbing out his name will create greater impact. Don't get me wrong, that scene was already heartbreaking but I just thought that would be more painful. Not sure if adding that make sense to the story though. Thank you so much for your books. They are amazing