me_idnsd

Important - Ever thought of a modern retelling of Ramayan? We have read, seen several modern renditions of Mahabharat but I feel Ramayan can have an even better modern rendition.
          	
          	So presenting to you all a little poetic excerpt from my upcoming Modern Raghav Janaki Story. 
          	
          	Do share your views
          	
          	Her feet, once adorned with jewels and grace,
          	Now tread on thorns in this desolate place.
          	With each step, memories of her past life unfold,
          	A queen in exile, a story untold.
          	
          	The moonlight weaves through the canopy above,
          	As Sita yearns for her lost realm of love.
          	Her tears, like pearls, adorn the earth's embrace,
          	A silent witness to her endless grace.
          	
          	In the depths of the night, she whispers a prayer,
          	**********
          	As Sita endures her agonizing pains.
          	
          	Yet amidst the darkness, a flicker of hope,
          	As Sita finds solace in her inner scope.
          	For within her womb, new life does thrive,
          	A symbol of resilience, of strength to survive.
          	
          	Though the forest may hold her in its grip,
          	Sita's spirit refuses to submit.
          	For even in exile, she remains a queen,
          	Her courage, her faith, a sight unseen.
          	
          	So let the winds carry her tale afar,
          	Of Sita's agony, her guiding star.
          	For in her suffering, she finds her might,
          	A beacon of hope, in the darkest night.

Charumati_

@me_idnsd aha jaldi jaldi publish then
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PandavPriye

@me_idnsd that'll be unique... 
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me_idnsd

@PandavPriye basically this is gonna be a rendition of Ramayan in Kaliyug so I am sure you gonna love it, as the story would be twisted but won't deviate from its actual essence
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queer-fish

Ghoda ghayal kyu na ho thaka hua kyu na ho vo ghoda hota hai gadha nahi (⁠⌐⁠■⁠-⁠■⁠)
          
          Me_idnsd mara hua kyu na hoo, exams k pressure me dafna hua kyu na hoo, vo idnsd hai Mrit nhi -$-

queer-fish

@Charumati_ yeh godha kya hai bey?
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Charumati_

@queer-fish I read like godha as gadha too and be like publicly gaali XD 
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me_idnsd

Important - Ever thought of a modern retelling of Ramayan? We have read, seen several modern renditions of Mahabharat but I feel Ramayan can have an even better modern rendition.
          
          So presenting to you all a little poetic excerpt from my upcoming Modern Raghav Janaki Story. 
          
          Do share your views
          
          Her feet, once adorned with jewels and grace,
          Now tread on thorns in this desolate place.
          With each step, memories of her past life unfold,
          A queen in exile, a story untold.
          
          The moonlight weaves through the canopy above,
          As Sita yearns for her lost realm of love.
          Her tears, like pearls, adorn the earth's embrace,
          A silent witness to her endless grace.
          
          In the depths of the night, she whispers a prayer,
          **********
          As Sita endures her agonizing pains.
          
          Yet amidst the darkness, a flicker of hope,
          As Sita finds solace in her inner scope.
          For within her womb, new life does thrive,
          A symbol of resilience, of strength to survive.
          
          Though the forest may hold her in its grip,
          Sita's spirit refuses to submit.
          For even in exile, she remains a queen,
          Her courage, her faith, a sight unseen.
          
          So let the winds carry her tale afar,
          Of Sita's agony, her guiding star.
          For in her suffering, she finds her might,
          A beacon of hope, in the darkest night.

Charumati_

@me_idnsd aha jaldi jaldi publish then
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PandavPriye

@me_idnsd that'll be unique... 
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me_idnsd

@PandavPriye basically this is gonna be a rendition of Ramayan in Kaliyug so I am sure you gonna love it, as the story would be twisted but won't deviate from its actual essence
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PandavPriye

Haloooo

PandavPriye

@me_idnsd good here too. How's life ?
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queer-fish

Zinda ho!?

me_idnsd

@queer-fish karte hain just ek message kar Dena normal message
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queer-fish

@me_idnsd Mujhe unblock krne ki kripa karengi ? WhatsApp me?
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