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Yall i was at an enha concert yesterday and u have no idea how much i want to show everyone of u pictures from the concert THEY WERE GORGEOUS Hoon looked UNREAL Like im actually gonna cry

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I would like to assume that all of u has read wheelchair - Ni-ki fanfic already. I was searching for some more fanfics as I haven’t really had the energy or motivation to even start a new one these days and i came across that one again. Looking closely at it all the chapters were posted on the same day. So thinking abt it do yall think the author knew that her full publish one day will be one of the best piece of work ppl has ever read and leave them with long term emotional trauma? 

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Ok i gotta ask, this next chapter to me it sounds like im stretching it since I’m not even done yet and it’s 1.6k words already so I gotta ask if the story is going too slow for any of you guys, I know it sounds weird but this is genuinely a concern like I want to shorten it but all the information seems important but what do you think? Should i go with a faster pace or just the way it is now?

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    I just brought all the desire:unleash albums and for the lucky draw I GOT HEESEUNG IN THE COLLAR
    I wanna frame it so bad yall

      manimurariki_

      Honestly trying to continue the story without going way too fast or dragging it is so hard like how do u find the middle point and make it not rushed but still enjoyable for readers to want to continue reading ur stories
      • TheJaylineEffect

        @manimurariki_ 
        
        It's definitely not easy, and I’m not sure if the way I see things will help you get any clearer... but here’s my take, for what it’s worth.
        
        Whenever I try to write too fast⏤just to keep readers engaged⏤it almost always backfires. The result ends up feeling rushed, and when I go back and reread those chapters before continuing the story, I can usually tell. It just feels off, like something’s missing.
        
        Over time, I’ve learned to write only when the inspiration is really there.
        
        Which means:
        ◦ Sometimes readers have to wait quite a while between updates.
        ◦ And other times, the inspiration hits so hard that I’ll post 3 or 4 chapters at once⏤or even multiple chapters across different stories in the same burst.
        
        Let’s not forget: this is not something you’re getting paid to do.
        So honestly, I’d say wait until the desire to write comes back naturally⏤it always does, eventually.
        Pushing it tends to lead to frustration.
        
        I hope that helped a little, at least.
        Take care of yourself!✨
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      manimurariki_

      Heyy guys it’s been a while
      Lowkey I’m actually already done with everything that was stopped me from continuing this story. But now I feel so unmotivated to actually write it like I have the story that I want to continue already, but idk how to actually make it entertaining and good enough for ppl to read it and enjoy. Idk if anyone else feels like this or not but it feels like however I write it it still isnt good enough for me to be satisfied with it and publish it. Im really sorry to others for not updating I will try to find the time to concentrate and attempt to write this chapter for the umpteenth time

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      Damn I just saw today 1K views for the seven shadows, I didn’t think ppl would like it but thank you guys for this, to some it may be less but it makes me genuinely happy knowing some ppl like and enjoy my story :))✨

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      Hey guys! I was procrastinating my studies by rereading what I wrote and I realized some of it looks really rushed or like looks poorly written so like when I have the time or maybe even after exams I will spend it solely on editing and improving the chapters cuz honestly some of it I started writing the chapters and rushed it halfway through so it sounds weird so yah :)
      • TheJaylineEffect

        @manimurariki_ 
        It's the raw essence of what gets published that truly matters, don't you think?
        Just be careful not to fall into the trap of being a "chronic rewriter-constant reviser-self-critical-perfectionist" (an ultra-explosive combo!) 
        You might end up transforming your story so much that it loses its original spark (the one that intrigued readers... including myself!)
        That said, I totally understand how you feel, as I'm always striving for the perfect phrasing, the perfect intrigue, the perfect... everything! 
        Luckily, I succeed in making a point of not touching anything once it's online!
        Wishing you beautiful writing!
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      • manimurariki_

        @TheJaylineEffect yeaa I’ll try my best to keep it the way it is it’s just some parts that were really rushed or sounds weird so yeaa I’ll just edit those parts 
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      Heeseung never fails to remind me y he’s my bias THE COACHELLA PERFORMANCE IS SURREAL IT WAS SO GOOD OML 
      I think Jay hoon and niki is now my firm bias wrecker AND WON SUNOO AND JAKE IS SO HOT TOO OMG 
      Im going insane chat

        UltraAquarian