maknut

Hi guys u was wondering how everyone is doing?  what do u guys think of the book so far 

Moismine

I really like your story idea, but your grammar, spelling, and never using paragraphs or quotation marks is killing me.  I always make these mistakes, but still.  Hope you can start writing more neatly (its a pet peeve of mine), other than that I really enjoy your stories.

Ilysmkkbye

Tips:
          -Write your story in paragraphs.
          -Use quotes when a character is talking. ( "Do you want to go to the park?" Sally asked me. )
          -Make sure to use correct grammar
          -Be sure to end ALL of your sentences with a period, question mark, ect.
          That's pretty much all I can give you! Hope it helps! :) <3