lyricclue

hey! i just finished editing "umbrella," if you guys want to check it out. nothing plot wise has changed, but i did make changes on a few grammatical things, reworded some stuff, and most importantly i changed some of the dialogue and bits of the story that dealt with things like consent and feminism. just little parts you probably won't notice or remember, but i wanted to revise the bits because these issues are very important, and i just wanted to get the thought out there. 
          	(also changed my username btw, i used to be 'TheWorldIsYourCanvas')
          	have an awesome time and stay safe everyone!

lyricclue

hey! i just finished editing "umbrella," if you guys want to check it out. nothing plot wise has changed, but i did make changes on a few grammatical things, reworded some stuff, and most importantly i changed some of the dialogue and bits of the story that dealt with things like consent and feminism. just little parts you probably won't notice or remember, but i wanted to revise the bits because these issues are very important, and i just wanted to get the thought out there. 
          (also changed my username btw, i used to be 'TheWorldIsYourCanvas')
          have an awesome time and stay safe everyone!