
kannasoto
Just read your first few chapters of the book you told me about! I think it’s a great story the character development is pretty good I do think that a little bit more of an introduction or at least a bit more into who Serene is, is needed, but I see where you’re headed clearly and I think you’re doing a great job! Your writing is welll done only other thing I have to say is be sure to check your grammar and vocab to be sure it flows cohesively, and keep writing! I can tell if you keep it up you’ll be a big fan fave on here much love❤️