lightguard35

Hey, guys, I just returned back to wattpad after a couple of years, and I recently posted a castlevania story. I was hoping if you guys could read it and let me know. I just recently started watching the show, and I could really use some critics upon character development in my story or if I'm lacking something  :)

princessrozalia369

@lightguard35 Their story was somewhat sad, as it was full of barriers and was great! 
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princessrozalia369

@lightguard35 Complete the fourth part of the story of Pharaoh Atem and his greatest priest Seath !!!! We ask you this part immediately !!!! 
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kannasoto

Just read your first few chapters of the book you told me about! I think it’s a great story the character development is pretty good I do think that a little bit more of an introduction or at least a bit more into who Serene is, is needed, but I see where you’re headed clearly and I think you’re doing a great job! Your writing is welll done only other thing I have to say is be sure to check your grammar and vocab to be sure it flows cohesively, and keep writing! I can tell if you keep it up you’ll be a big fan fave on here much love❤️

DreamyAutumnRose

Hey Light, I'm, Aurora and I saw on your profile that you like yugioh DM. I love that series too and it's my favourite!

DreamyAutumnRose

I just read your book Yu-Gi-Oh! Book 1 Lost purpose and it broke my heart  It was so sad how Kaiba changed towards Mokuba. Oh my gosh when he broke down ahhhh  but I'm glad that Yugi and friends are all there to support him. It was heartwarming to read the moment when Kaiba caressed Mokuba's cheek when he was asleep though, it showed that Kaiba still loved him. 
            
            Mokuba is one of my favourite characters in the show but I haven't met many Mokuba fans and I love when you described him as "sweet and precious" because that's how I see him too 
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DreamyAutumnRose

That's cool! I look forward to it :) 
            
            I'm a pretty new Yugioh fan but I could honestly go on and on about the show and characters. That's why I started reading and writing stories here recently and I love meeting other Yugioh lovers too :D
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lightguard35

@DreamyAutumnRose hello, pleasure to meet you! Oh yes I am a Hard fan of Yugioh and I am still just taking a short break from the fandom and doing something new these days, like writing castlevania story and I made my own DM of Yugioh with my oc is, I'll return to the Yugioh story soon in winter :)
            
            Cool!!! I love Yugioh too!!!! :D
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RandomReaderx3465

Thanks for the follow and the votes! I’m having a really big procrastination period, but I’m not gonna abandon it I promise! How did you find me?

RandomReaderx3465

@lightguard35 Sorry, I had emojis and I’m at a field trip
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lightguard35

@RandomReaderx3465 ahm, I don't see your message...
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KooriDragon

Lol just watched the second ep of Castlevania >D<
          
          Trevor is kinda hilarious to me ngl—
          
          The bar fight was awesome, live the jokes in there >D<
          
          Also he literally steals an apple from one of the Speakers before walking out which absolutely sent me—

princessrozalia369

@lightguard35  Of course, I was talking about the novel that I wrote about the Pharaoh Atem and Seath, which is "We Might Fall" is that novel that I want you to complete because it is a wonderful literal
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princessrozalia369

@lightguard35 ~ Thank you for your response, great writer! Literally, I am waiting for you to complete the story on the hottest embers !! Can't you balance the two stories now? I mean ... , that you can focus as much as you focus on the current story for Castilvania, you can also update ATEM and Seath! , believe me, my writer, you will not lose anything!  You can do that !! You can !! Greetings, Rozalia 369 
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lightguard35

@princesssrozalia369 its been quite a long time since I wrote about that story and I basically trying to focus on castlevania story, BUT in winter time I will think about updating the next chapter okay :)
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lightguard35

Hey, guys, I just returned back to wattpad after a couple of years, and I recently posted a castlevania story. I was hoping if you guys could read it and let me know. I just recently started watching the show, and I could really use some critics upon character development in my story or if I'm lacking something  :)

princessrozalia369

@lightguard35 Their story was somewhat sad, as it was full of barriers and was great! 
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princessrozalia369

@lightguard35 Complete the fourth part of the story of Pharaoh Atem and his greatest priest Seath !!!! We ask you this part immediately !!!! 
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QueenofGames23

Hi how are you. Ummm I was wondering if you want to help me on a YGO story ? Like a collab

QueenofGames23

@lightguard35  i dont really like sharing my ideas on the public message. I dont want someone nicking my idea.  
            
            Are you on IG or FB?
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lightguard35

Well, can you tell me the idea of your story you are writing?
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KooriDragon

Hey what’s up! I just saw you posted!

lightguard35

@KooriDragon your welcome and I look forward to it :D
            Your welcome ♥️ 
            
            
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KooriDragon

@lightguard35 Thank you! I’ll probably start updating more >v<
            
            By the way, thanks for voting on my books!
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Empress_Of_The_Sun

Found you, sis :D

Empress_Of_The_Sun

@lightguard35 THANK YOU FOIR ALL THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENTS, I LOVE YOU ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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lightguard35

@Empress_Of_The_Sun Awwwww your welcome sweetie pie ❤️  I promise to leave comments tomorrow ;)
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Empress_Of_The_Sun

@lightguard35 YOU ARE WELCOME AND THANKS, MAKES ME SO HAPPY T.T
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KooriDragon

Uhm do you still update? Your last one was over a year ago :(

KooriDragon

@lightguard35 Lmao almost been over a year since I first messaged you—
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KooriDragon

@lightguard34 I just realized I don’t remember how I found you?
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KooriDragon

@lightguard34 Thanks! To like both your comments lol also the art of my pfp isn’t mine
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