leenadella

Hey Guys!!
          	
          	So I'm back and I'll start updating both my books. So, I came ith this really beautiful and amazing book. "The Definition Of Love". It's written by one of my really good friends. Please read it. She's close to 2K reads and I want that to happen for her. Please read, follow and vote. @Amara1611 is her account. There's a sequel too! So hurry up and get reading!!!
          	
          	Thanks Guys!
          	Love,
          	Leena
          	
          	P.S.: Her book is just brilliant. Please read and vote. But, don't forget poor old me... ;)
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/87511600

Amara1611

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armiiwolf

please unfollow me! that'll be appreciated.

leenadella

I understand. I'm waiting for your books!! 
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armiiwolf

hi! i actually wanted to restart this account and make this into an official one. i have another backup but it's only for chatting with my mutuals. i'm gonna be publishing books here, but i realized that my followers are from a whole different fandom and they might not relate to the content i post so i told them to unfollow! :) following someone when you don't relate to their content id pointless and a waste of time and space. i was also a bit uneasy about gaining followers when i don't even publish books, and that's another reason why i told everyone to unfollow. i hope you understand! thanks a lot. 
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livingthenightmare18

@lee_2113's
          Hey so I need your help with something. I've seen your cover book designs and I really loved them. So may u plz make 1 for me? Plz notify me if u agree so I can tell u the details I want on the cover. Thanx
          @alaabutterflygirl18 

leenadella

@livingthenightmare18 
            
            Hello,
            
            I would surely help you out. Thanks for checking designs out and I'm glad you liked them. PM me with the details you want on your cover.
            
            Love,
            Leena
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leenadella

Hey Guys!!
          
          So I'm back and I'll start updating both my books. So, I came ith this really beautiful and amazing book. "The Definition Of Love". It's written by one of my really good friends. Please read it. She's close to 2K reads and I want that to happen for her. Please read, follow and vote. @Amara1611 is her account. There's a sequel too! So hurry up and get reading!!!
          
          Thanks Guys!
          Love,
          Leena
          
          P.S.: Her book is just brilliant. Please read and vote. But, don't forget poor old me... ;)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/87511600

Amara1611

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HarlowAlvin

Hi !
          check it out please and tell me if you like it
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/110883082-flashback

leenadella

I read your book. It's a really good story but I would like to give you a few suggestions:- 
            
            1. Grammar 
            
            Your grammar is good enough to understand but, the wrong tenses are being used in a few places and also you're repeating the same words which decreases attention received by the reader. I suggest you to use an app called Grammarly. You can also add it as an extension on your browser. 
            
            2. POV
            
            The POV's are being changed very frequently which makes it difficult for the reader to understand who is the speaker. 
            
            3. Length of Chapters
            
            Chapters are too short. To increase the number of readers and votes, you need to increase the number of words in every chapter. At least 1500 words to begin with is good enough. 
            
            Thanks for asking me to read. I hope I helped. And do check out my work!
            
            Love,
            Leena. 
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