lanabelle48

Chapter 1 of the sequel to Two Perfect Wrongs has been published.

melidutreize

Hi sorry to bother you I was wondering when you were going to update your story "A Little Bit of Hope" please? I can't wait to see Adam's conversation with Molly and more Chelsea bashing lol

melidutreize

@lanabelle48 Unfortunately I don't have the talent for writing, that's why I suggested this idea to you.
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lanabelle48

@melidutreize I don't think it's horrible, it's really good. You should write it.
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melidutreize

Okay, I was thinking of a story where after Chelsea frames him for murder, Adam is forced to stay with Chelsea because she's blackmailing him using Connor. She could be abusive to Adam both physically and mentally. She could belittle him and be psychologically violent in public and prevent him from seeing his family and Sharon. Sally, who understands what's going on, secretly befriends Adam. Adam's family, especially Victor, noticing that Adam is in an abusive relationship, gives Adam the courage to leave Chelsea. Then Adam could fall for Sally, and when he feels healed from what he's been through, he tries to start a relationship with her. Later, when the whole Newman family is together to celebrate, Chelsea could take them hostage and shoot Adam in front of her son, and she would finally be arrested.
            
            What do you think? Is that horrible?
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melidutreize

Hi, thanks for the chapter of "A Little Bitt of Hope" which I loved, Chelsea will always have a jealousy even minimal towards Sharon, will she go out with Billy or someone else?

lanabelle48

@melidutreize Thank you! I often joke that I'd write the show for free if they'd let me kill Chelsea off. I think the show needs a fresh take because he's so burnt. I don't watch anymore mainly because of his writing with Chelsea and her acting being a close second.
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melidutreize

@lanabelle48 That's not wrong, she also had great chemistry with Michael Muhney, I think you would be a much better screenwriter than him
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lanabelle48

@melidutreize For me Chadam ended when J.H. left. MCE and MG don't have any chemistry and the characters have outgrown each other. I think everyone knows that this version of Chadam sucks except for Josh and his number one pet. I hate the way he writes Chelsea. I've never liked her but shes down right insufferable under his pen.
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melidutreize

I wonder how Sally will react when she learns that her sister slept twice with a married man who is also the husband of Summer, the woman who already hates her. I suspect she will take it badly, because the Newman family will hate her even more, and so will Phyllis. It will be a complete disaster, and I wouldn't be surprised if Sally forces Coco to return to Los Angeles quickly.

melidutreize

@lanabelle48 You're right, thank you for answering me.
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lanabelle48

@melidutreize I got some plans for CoCo. Sally will find out soon, I'm giving her some time to get settled back in with Adam and Hope.
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melidutreize

Bonsoir , tu a finis ton histoire ? je pensais que Paul et la police auraient déjà retrouvé Sally ou feras-tu une suite ?

melidutreize

@lanabelle48 Oh okay, I understand thank you
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lanabelle48

@melidutreize I have finished this story. I'll be picking up with a sequel soon. My plan is to make each calendar year it's own story.
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melidutreize

@lanabelle48 oh sorry I wanted to say, Good evening have you finished your story? I thought the police would have found Sally by now or will you make a sequel?
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melidutreize

Hi, I wanted to ask when will you update your story "Two Perfect Wrongs" please? I can't wait to see what happens next

melidutreize

@lanabelle48 Oh  a new story, still Adam and Sally or something else entirely
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melidutreize

Good evening , I was wondering if Adam and the others will eventually find out that it was Victor who gave Chloe the address of the cabin? in the soap they never revealed it, it would be devastating for Adam to discover that his only parent wanted him dead.

melidutreize

@lanabelle48 oh okay sorry I didn't know
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lanabelle48

@melidutreize They all know that. It was mentioned when Mark first joined the show.
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melidutreize

@lanabelle48 Oh I guess he prefers to act like he doesn't know but how will Nick react to learning that his father almost succeeded in killing his little brother? I hope Adam will confide in Sally, that's one thing Adam knows but if the others learning that Victor Newman deliberately almost killed his own son will leave maybe them speechless.
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melidutreize

Good evening I wanted to ask you when were you going to update your fictions ? Sorry to ask this but I almost became addicted to your stories and I miss reading the next chapters

melidutreize

@lanabelle48 oh cool thank you very much
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lanabelle48

@melidutreize I'm working on some stuff, should be coming soon.
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melidutreize

Hi I don't know if you've watched The Young and the Restless lately but Sally is apparently "in a relationship" with Billy after kissing twice and sleeping together once and have getting to know each other in just a few weeks, I find that its lame because once again she rebounds with another man too soon after her breakup with Adam, and she takes things too seriously after she slept with Billy she sees already it as a serious relationship.

melidutreize

@melidutreize I wanted to offer you an idea, what if you paused your stories and wrote a new story with characters that can inspire you? maybe inspiration can come back later, sometimes inspiration can come without you looking for it, then I don't want to assume anything but maybe you are no longer really inspired by Adam and Sally because of what happens in the soap opera?
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melidutreize

Oh okay , I understand
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lanabelle48

@melidutreize I'm working on it, the motivation isn't always there.
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