Hello po, Miss Mily. I had fun reading your story entitled Ex Back Formula and it gives me a lot of realizations in life.
This story taught me not to chase some on who's busy chasing someone else. Also, we shouldn't ignore the red flags in lne relationship. We should be ready enough before entering in a relationship to avoid conflicts. Love is a two way process; we should give and take.
Upon reading your story, I realized that my predictions about the ending is faw from its outcome. The plot twist is good and I really had fun reading it. Every chapter has its lesson that I can really relate.
Few suggestions that I want to suggest is that to add more plot twist that will make the reader feel the mixed emotions. In addition, use heavy lines to really caught your readers.
I enjoy it so much. I hope to read and buy more published stories from you, Ms. Author. Thank you for creating such a masterpiece!
Keep crafting and keep inspiring your readers!
