jesse-has-clock

i ended up posting the first chapters of the two rewrites lol
meant to do it yesterday but my wifi was out

LisaHatchett

Hey Jesse! 
I love the first story you wrote(the one with kunai), I'm currently reading it, but I got confused when you mention that you'll rewrite it. 
Or edit it???? 
What do you mean by this? 
Are you going to write a whole other story? 
Or should I start reading from the beginning again? 
And is it a problem if I just continue reading? 
Maybe you recommend me to read another of your stories, such as the Ring of the Artisis...??? (Forgot the name sorry) 
I really need answers, thank you

jesse-has-clock

i ended up posting the first chapters of the two rewrites lol
meant to do it yesterday but my wifi was out
  • wolfy-kun12365

    @ jesse-has-clock  I love both chapters already they're really good! Keep up the good work and don't rush yourself:)
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wolfy-kun12365

Hello I really love your story the one from elsewhere! And I wanted to ask if you going ot continue the story and if you already know when you Posted the new chapter! But please don't feel like you need for rush or do something that you didn't wna to continue I only asked<3 
(Sorry if my English isn't good it isn't my first language)

jesse-has-clock

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not to be like,,, an asshole, i guess, but i'm rewriting my two (three ig) books?

i know i already rewrote ring of the artisan twice technically, but i've been experimenting in my writing and have started writing original fiction and i'm finding it *really* difficult to write in second person point of view now

not to mention that i'm not fully happy with my works? i've grown a lot and feel like i can write the stories so much better and do them justice, both plot-wise and style-wise. a lot of things don't feel right and i know it's only fanfiction but i really want to do my best!

i'll definitely leave 'ring of the artisan' up for anyone to read anytime, and i'll continue editing it when i can, but 'heart of the artisan' and 'the one from elsewhere' most likely will be unpublished eventually since they aren't completed in favour of the rewrites

sorry for that long post lol (and the double-spacing it makes it easier for me to read my ramblings) but i basically disappeared for like two months and wanted to share what i've been thinking about and why i haven't done anything recently

jesse-has-clock

might be spending some time either on a break or editing / rewriting my two stories rn
just a little warning

jesse-has-clock

i don't know how many readers read these lol, but a warning that both my stories most likely won't be updated on time
i've been having a rough week lol i'm doing a fair bit better but i haven't been getting things done recently
thanks :)

jesse-has-clock

((i forgor to hit "announce to my followers" on the last post guys lol))

    jesse-has-clock

    first chapter of heart of the artisan is arriving in two hours (hopefully) exactly!!
    i'm super excited and really nervous!!

    jesse-has-clock

    did the samurai's identity ever get revealed in ring of the artisan?
    i'm looking back through that book and i actually don't think it's ever really revealed. the samurai just kind of vanished over time lol?
    think it's too late to fix that plot-hole, but i could try and address it in the sequel maybe