jeongsaa

How many of you have read "Moonlight"? 

jeongsaa

Oh, I forgot.  I wanted to say something. So where are all my old readers? The once who used to read Our Love Story. I used to have many people who would read, vote, and comment. I don't care about the voting that much. But I really miss interacting with you all. I think some of my old readers don't have Wattpad anymore. Maybe they deleted it. But anyway, write something if you read my books so I know how many people are still here reading my books. 

jeongsaa

@jeongsaa Oh okay, I understand. I'm happy you replied <333 and also thank you for reading my books and supporting them ❤️  
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FelipePoblete4

@ jeongsaa  i started reading from "My everything", i normally don't interact with writers since i'm kinda shy, however so far i've always liked your stories <3
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jeongsaa

Hello, I'm editing "Our Love Story" right now. I will publish the chapters after I edit each one of them. Make sure to read it if you haven't. Our Love Story was my first story/book. I love it so much and I hope you also like it.  For those who already have read it, read it again if you want. I might change things. Bye,! See you! ❤️ 

jeongsaa

I wanted to edit "Our Love Story" as well and publish it again but it will take a lot of time. It was my first book so there's a lot to do. I will not change anything in the story, just the writing, and maybe very soon I will publish it again. Okay?? 

jeongsaa

Hey guys!! Please I want you all to write your opinion on "heartbeat" in the next chapter. Because I don't know how it's going. In my mind, it's so good but when I write it down I don't know sometimes nothing makes sense because I'm not the best at writing. I would appreciate it if you wrote your opinion about my writing or the story so I can make it better. And have to advise me every time I write a new chapter. 

jeongsaa

@FelipePoblete4 Thank you so much!! I don't know what to say. You made my day with this<333 I will keep that in mind. I do the same sometimes. Reading other stories makes me learn more so you're right. thank you so much for the reply. <3333 
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FelipePoblete4

@ jeongsaa  personally i really like it, i don't think your writing is bad, i do think maybe adding images or using music could help with overall feeling of the chapter, that could add like an extra layer to the chapter itself, but i don't think you have bad writing. I don't write fanfics, but i write stories for myself, one thing that helps me, it's just reading a lot of different stories, like romance, fantasy, mistery even horror novels, cause the more content you consume the more you learn, still i think your story is good so far, so keep up the good work
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