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@tinna938 yeah you've sort put words here and their and tense and stuff like that but I don't know how to write u a review

@jannatikhan I was hoping to get a review like yours. I wanted to know how wrong I was. Could you tell me if the whole book is in very bad English, or is it grammar? I do not see these mistakes because in my country we have a way of writing completely different from English. I know the words in English, but sometimes it is not necessary to use them to form a sentence, but in my language it is necessary.

@tinna938 you want constructive criticism right so don't mind plz I read your book and I think you've got a great story but u need to work on your English real badly please dont mind what I said 

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