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I made the first part of my story but I need feedback, I'm scared to post it (Help me please I don't know what to do )

YALL AHHH, i'm so excited i'm writing a book so please give me feed back on how it is 

Dо уоu publish оn Neobook ?

Don't you ever just go back to look at the things you texted before like in 2022. and you look at the messages that are in 2022 and you're just like this is so disgusting, why did I ever text like this, when did I ever say this what was.

I'm just here to infiltrate your message board, don't mind me-

Boop!
          You have been booped. Boop 15 others and let the chaos spread.

Hello, bubby  I am here with a new book . It's called 8th grade gay.  This one is not just about sexuality but it is about romance, love, family and friendship. There will definitely be plenty of action and some serious drama in this one.
          Cold guy + sunshine boy = perfect match ❤️
          
          
          

Thankyouuu for voting bubby 

Thankyouuu for voting ❤️☺️✨

Sorry for disturbing your conversation board lol. I just wanted to thank you for the support on my books and for commenting, it means more to me than you know <3 also, you've motivated me to work on a chapter for my Mattheo and Regulus book, I'm hoping it'll be out at least by Valentine's day. I know it's a while away, but I struggle to write currently so I'll try my best. Again, sorry and thank you!  <3