Short Stories

I'm a human being who's trying to get better at writing. If you could help me that'd be awesome :D

Dude the stuff I wrote over the summer is way better than anything I could do now

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY

I'm gonna start writing on here by probably writing a bunch of random short stories and stuff

It'd be nice if you follow me but you don't have to 

Oh yeah- here's some stuff about me
FAVORITE COLOR: toaster
FAVORITE MOVIE: Avengers: Endgame
FAVORITE BOOK/SERIES: Recursion by Blake Crouch
FAVORITE FOOB: potatoes in any form probably.
FAVORITE GENRE: Sci-Fi or Fantasy or Thriller or all of them I guess
FAVORITE BANDS/SINGER: gonna have to go with 5SOS
FAVORITE VIDEO GAME: Fortnite
FAVORITE YOUTUBERS: PutzGaming, Cowbelly Studios, LazarBeam, Fe4RLess (rip), J Perm
HOBBIES: Clarinetist, speedcuber (average is about 19 seconds as of 2/10/20), swimming, writing, reading, doing math, procrastinating
PETS?: yes: a golden retriever that likes running around really fast
FAVORITE ELEMENT: Iridium

have fun and have a good day

thank 

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