hisgirlof04

Hii my precious bratz
          	Im so sorry for my loooong break but im back and ready for more romance
          	Stay tuned for the upcoming chapters
          	Xoxox

cassiexoxo09

Your story is very good! It's better than most fetish kink stories. Miles and Kayleigh's relationship, though not perfect, is a much healthier relationship than other kink wattpad couples. One thing I would say is to maybe back off the sex a little bit to where they aren't having intercourse every single day. As dark as this story is, it has emotion. The scene where Taylor is giving Miles a blow and Kayleigh is watching as punishment is *chef's kiss* and it felt as more of a sad moment for Kayleigh then a kinky moment if that makes sense. The aftermath is very sweet and also has an impact. Every fetish story I read usually has a very toxic relationship and it's refreshing to find a good story! I hope you'll update soon!

hisgirlof04

@cassiexoxo09 heyyy im so glad for yoyr feedback and promise to collaborate more of those suggestions in the up coming chapters
            Xoxox
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shradha_mehta

Hey when will u update the book??

shradha_mehta

@shradha_mehta hey it's been so many days... Pls update!!
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hisgirlof04

@shradha_mehta sure no problem
            ... Actually i have the vision in mind so it'll just flow... Thank you for reading! 
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shradha_mehta

@shradha_mehta okay ..tysm for replying..and in how many chapters will you sum up the book??
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queenyriri

r u gonna continue a little defiance???

queenyriri

@hisgirlof04 ok thx cause it one of my favorites and i really wanna know what happens next
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hisgirlof04

@queenyriri yess actually... I'm updating very soon
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