heavyemotions0408

Hi Thankyou for showing love! 1k views and 50 stars on Accidental Armour  Hurrre! 
          	
          	Which character you like the most ?
          	1.Geet 
          	2.Moon 
          	3.Payal 
          	4.Jay
          	5.Other

MacySnow

Hello there I hope you are doing well I have been reading your book Accidental Armour, I  must say it is quite great. No offence or anything but I feel if you got a great editor it would surely top the charts on here. The storyline, the characters everything is just spectacular.

heavyemotions0408

@MacySnow Thankyou! I will improve it.
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heavyemotions0408

@MacySnow Thank you. could be more specific? What made you think I need an editor? I want to improve my stories in every possible way. Your feedback is valuable to me.
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MacySnow

@heavyemotions0408 I don't know how to explain exactly. It's just as much as I follow the plot half the time I am not sure what is happening. I know you said English was your second language do you by any chance use Google translate it's like that when I read.
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