rosedipped
omg you’re quite close to hitting 100 followers!
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rosedipped
why aren't any of elle chanel's books complete smh
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hello loves. ❤
I just wanted to let you all know that I've recently published a new book Battle For The Heavens. it's in the fantasy genre but has elements of teen fiction as well.
if you like reading about angels & humans & wars between heaven and hell, then I suggest you check this book out. it would really mean a lot to me, thank you! :)
lots of love,
Athena.
Hopefulhappiness
Hi, I am very pleased with your short story/book. It's really inspirational and I really liked it because of how relatable it is to many people's lives. The fact that I've experienced my own insecurities about the pressure of being perfect made it even more motivational and hopeful. It warms my heart whenever I find these kind of books to read.
The book didn't have many grammatical errors, as far as I could tell anyway. I'm not that particular on grammar, but it does bother me on occasions when people don't capitalize names or end sentences with periods. Haha, I just had to point that out because I can't stand reading pages that seem like rough drafts. I like to see some efforts in editing work. I blame my English teacher for that.
There's really not much I can criticize, on my belief. I'm not really a good critic, so that's part of it. But I would like to know if you actually experienced some of the things that were in the book. There were some cases where I wasn't really feeling what you were getting at, but maybe that's just me. Other than that, that's all I got haha. I'll surely let you know if I have anymore comments. :) It's an overall fantastic book, and I'm really happy that I found it.
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@Hopefulhappiness hey, i'm so glad you liked my book! :) it makes me so happy that you took the time to send me this comment and critique my book. <3 and yes, i have experienced a few of the things in my book. i don't want to say exactly what but i definitely have. there are always elements of me in my writing, its what makes it mine i guess! and i'd love to know exactly which places you didn't get what i mean, so i can try to remedy that. again, thanks so much for reading it and liking it! <33
Mistalee_
Thanks so much for the votes and comments on Nocturne Skies :) Do you like it so far?
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@Mistalee_ aww you're welcome :) yea, i really like it so far, so keep up the good work! plus i absolutely love the title, Nocturne Skies. <3
lullabells
Oml I love your profile pic! ^-^♡♥
mispaint
Thank you for the votes, beautiful!
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@mispaint you're absolutely welcome! It was so beautiful and you totally deserved the votes and so much more!♥
Hohiropere
Hi Athena. :)
I just recently read your Insecurities book. Its beautiful about how she carried on. It's a book about surviving. Carrying on when the world pushes you down. It's beautifully written. Although she was bullied, abused, and isolated, she got back up, talked about her problems ans got help. Not every one has the power to do that.
Quick question did James and Lana ever get together? Or no..?
-Hohiropere.
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@Hohiropere Thank you so much for reading my book and I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And yes I completely agree, that's exactly how i wanted the book to be portrayed! And no, not everyone has the power to do that but I can honestly that it does help to do that, cause even when you think you have no one, there's always someone there willing to help you and accept you as you are. And yes, they did get together later in the year :)
aliza_markz
Hiiee...my name is Lynn and I am from India
I just wanted to know if you mind checking out my story 'Love is in the air'
I would really appreciate your votes and comments cause then I'll come to know how appealing is my story...
It's a teen fiction... Hoping for a positive reply.
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@lynn_naz Hi Lynn! And i'd love to check out your book! I hope you'll do the same and check out mine as well!
colloidal
Thanks for all the votes bby omf<3
