Hi Author,
I just finished reading your book "Vaani: His Forced Bride" and felt like sharing my thoughts.
So far, most of the forced bride or marriage stories I’ve come across usually revolve around families pushing for an arranged marriage. But your story felt refreshingly different — and I actually liked it.
There was just the right amount of thrill and curiosity throughout, but everything was also clear and well-paced.
Most importantly, you’ve portrayed the dynamics between the ML and FL so beautifully. Their chemistry, emotional tension, and the gradual shift in their relationship were written with such depth. I could really feel the bond developing — and that’s something you pull off so well.
Also, I wanted to ask — what’s the name of the story with Siya in it? I’d love to add that to my reading list too!
And just a note for you: Please don’t let the negative comments get to you. People throwing around terms like “pedophile” clearly miss the point. These are often the same readers who are perfectly fine when the ML is in his late 30s and the FL is barely 18 — suddenly then it’s all “romantic” or “mature love.” Hypocrisy, much?
Your concept is your creative space. It’s fiction, and more importantly, you’re exploring emotional layers, not glorifying anything toxic. So keep writing what your heart believes in. Your voice matters, and readers like me appreciate it.
Looking forward to more of your stories!
