greysonisonfire

Hi! I REALLY love your story! :D It's the best story I've read about Greyson Chance so far! :) It's been a crazy and wonderful journey with Greyson and Melodie!! :D Melodie and I have common interest in a way where I also have the desire to travel the world but do not have the ability, I really like the quote :) I'm very thankful to you because of your story you were able to drown me in my thoughts again and realize some important things :) Also, I wrote a poem inspired by your story which is very, very rare for me to do so and not to mention I'm not very good at it, so, thank you so much! :D I'm forever grateful to God who created the writer in you; it's a very wonderful gift He gave you. You should use it wisely, inspiring and motivating others as you did with me :) After all, anyone can inspire anybody.
          
          Anyways, good job and keet it up!
          
          P.S. The Fourteen Thousand Miles and Looking Glass, is it a real title of a song or you just made it up?
          
          P.S.S. Also, I added your other stories to my Library and plan to read it :) I'm pretty excited!

hello winnie it's ally i love you

Hey! I love your story Home Is Where The Heart Is. It's such a beautiful and amazing story. I love your writing style. It was very creative. You didn't use anyone to be the main character. And your writing. One word. Wow. You are an amazing writer :) I am so jealous :( I love how the way you end it. It's kind of a cliff hanging, but you made us imagine what will happen next which I like cause I have a wild of imagination XD 
          
          Also, the story story you said you are from Singapore. OMG! Me too. We could meet up sometime :) 
          
          Once again, I love your story. You an amazing writer. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more of your story :)

babygirl, i made another account lol i don't know what the fuck is wrong with me. :) i probably won't be using crimsonsouls anymore idk i just wanted to tell you. i love you. ❤

hello, winnie, this is your black rose ally. (◡‿◡✿)
          
          as you may not know, i deleted my previous account and now i'm going to be using this one to write about our annoying-alien-going-phase greyson. (✿◠‿◠)
          
          i love you, baby girl. ❤

Thank you for the critisism. Let me explain the entire story in the shortest way possibe. The prologue, portraits of him being forty-five and grieving. The reason why his Mother is fading and reappearing is because he is in fact schitzophrenic. But, in chapter two, he drinks away the agonizing pain of memories of his mother hurting him verbally. He's basically a serial killer; in which he blacks out when angered. But, he is also insane. So, there you have it. 
          
          Sorry about the long message. 

@greysonisonfire Vote & Comment and tell me what you think!

@Enchancer97 of course! I'm so flattered that you asked :)

Critique my story, "Into The Night", please?

@allythepunkrocker_ omg ally I just saw this I love you so much too ♥♥♥