greencloud79

Ok, recently people have been telling me about the paragraphs running together. For some reason I cant help that. I use both cpu and phone (andriod and iphone (best of both worlds)) and it comes out perfectly in the drafts but when I post on either device, they come out ran together with the exception of scene changes. Any advice or help would very much be appreciated if it will help solve this matter.

greencloud79

@greencloud79 with that being said, ive started the third book but havent posted yet til I can work out all the bugs but I know some are eagar to find out what happens so if you can get past the mile long paragraph, then I will post them shortly (besides I'm kinda excited to see the feedback on book 3)
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greencloud79

Ok, recently people have been telling me about the paragraphs running together. For some reason I cant help that. I use both cpu and phone (andriod and iphone (best of both worlds)) and it comes out perfectly in the drafts but when I post on either device, they come out ran together with the exception of scene changes. Any advice or help would very much be appreciated if it will help solve this matter.

greencloud79

@greencloud79 with that being said, ive started the third book but havent posted yet til I can work out all the bugs but I know some are eagar to find out what happens so if you can get past the mile long paragraph, then I will post them shortly (besides I'm kinda excited to see the feedback on book 3)
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piemenrip

Please Can you follow back at Davin40 :-(
          
          To, 
          Green cloud
          
          If you could please just go through the first few chapters for once it would be a great help >_<
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/249494528?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Davin40&wp_originator=3oFMxVR7QKkEz3kH6Jy%2BLAKQzE7EZBS8eJxPf5xG%2B1t2Wkt1crtk2buahHt3u4z8OndGi28fhzVcADhlNbGe6CL7XX3cAutm%2FTcoGnnwzZCj4mo%2ByGSm%2FmVZRQUaTBS4
          
          Thanking You, 
          
          
          Your's meschivious,
          Davin (^o^)