grapeTM

thoughts on xo kitty?

grapeTM

yall ever heard of deadplate?

beanstacular

@grapeTM i love dead plate!
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Kid-lost-inCostco

OMG YESSS ITS SO UNDERATTED
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Emilysiff

@grapeTM ooh ill look at it in pinterest
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MWAHISBARSFORHER

Heyy grape sorry I keep bothering you but I posted a new chapter can you please give me a approval on it I need a expert to look at my stuff 

MWAHISBARSFORHER

@MWAHISBARSFORHER  thank you and I just fixed that 
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grapeTM

@MWAHISBARSFORHER nah, you're all good and i'm shocked you consider me an expert, haha. as for the chapter, the only issues i see would be using more proper punctuation (its difficult to see where a sentence ends and begins) and use a bit more proper grammar. this last thing is kinda something i personally do, but i would recommend that you space out the words a bit more. like, every once in a while, press enter to start a new paragraph. for me personally, it's hard to read just a huge blob of text. but besides those things, you're doing pretty good! 
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