goddessofcereal56

It is finished.  Sorry for forgetting to remind you.  I am updating again regularly!

goddessofcereal56

I hate to do this so early in the month but I have to put the visible challenge on hold.  Don't worry, I am still writing!  It is just my writing must now be dedicated to this thing called a college essay?  Have you heard of it before?  Anyway, it means that my writing energy will be spent on that in the next few days or so, and not on here.  I will inform you when it is finished.  Thanks for being patient!

goddessofcereal56

I did week one of my personal challenge!  It may have been completed with less than an hour to failure but nothing like a time crunch to get you to work on writing!  Enjoy and see you tomorrow since I am exhausted.  Also to those in the US happy Independence Day!

mmmartin10

I am so loving your comments all the way through my book. Thanks so much, I really appreciate your thoughtful insights into the story and my characters!

mmmartin10

@goddessofcereal56 it does!!!
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goddessofcereal56

@mmmartin10 thanks. I am more of a reader than a writer but I do know how to deeply analyze them.  If it at all helps of course
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delusionalTrance

What did think of my story honest opinion?

delusionalTrance

@delusionalTrance honesty is a good policy i plan to fix it once i finish Ella Dearest
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goddessofcereal56

@delusionalTrance It was a great story, however, I was a little confused about what was happening, it almost gave me whiplash.  I do think it really does have potential if I could follow quite what happened with the Evil One and the True Love.  It seems like you have a beginning and an end (both which are excellent) but what is in the middle I am confused on.  Hope this helps and I am not depressing you.  If so sorry, goddessofcereal56
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