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ReinaDenise
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Hi, would you be willing to read my new chapter on the book I just started? I would really love to hear Ideas
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@ReinaDenise That's honestly beautiful. The only thing I would change is a little longer/more descriptive ending... you describe so much hurt through out the poem. Let the reader feel the healing as much as you did :)
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