Szweetlover
Are you going to finish Love That's Fair?
VaibhavBharty
Loved your story.I'm in search of my mate.And as Indian v can't open up like Ryan.but I turned bit emotional. Can I get ur email please just casual talks
stormyhumboldt
Sweet story. There are quite a few grammar errors that detracted my attention. --there is 2 guys-- Should be there are 2. Same thing later with "is 2 girls"...
I do proof reading & I will proof your story if you wish.
Let me know & be well!
-----Stormy
VaibhavBharty
@stormyhumboldt hey miss or mr dont c it as a critic just enjoy criticism sometime takes away the feel n enjoyment of story.but i do aknowladge ur efforts
wolfgirl906
Do you want to be friends? I ALWAYS WANTED A GAY FRIEND!!! Ops that was a bit creepy sorry.