lj7lilacScorpus

Hi Genivieve, this looks great and I enjoyed reading your novel!
          
          Just some points to consider:
          
          When you edited the last 3 chapters you didn't delete the paragraphs you reducted - these are showing as double repeated paragraphs. Please either delete these or complete the paragraphs!
          
          Perfectly done I'm proud of you!
          
          Luvvies M.Liesl