Fiza Pathan

mind checkin out my story smoke so far? id love to get some feedback for chapter 4

hi Fizz good to see you in wattpad...
          I'm very happy to see u here and thanks for following me.

My new short story Flesh of Flesh has been published on Amazon. 
          Book-bio: Thakur Vijay Singh Rathod was one of the richest political businessmen in Mumbai. He was revered by his wife, Savitri, who wanted to give him a son, the heir to his inheritance. But fate decreed otherwise. This is a story of Thakur Vijay Singh Rathod, a proud and ruthless man, his wife Savitri - religious and completed devoted to him, his offspring, and his abandoned child.(4824 words0 #transgender #shortstory
          http://www.amazon.com/Flesh-Short-Story-Fiza-Pathan-ebook/dp/B00K6YAX8Y/

I am thrilled to announce the release of my first Poetry Book
          'So This Is Love - Collected Poems.'
          
          "As the book description puts it: There are many facets to love. It can be all-embracing, passionate, fulfilling, platonic. And when this love is shattered, it gives rise to anguish, hate, anger, jealously, and melancholy. There are times when such powerful emotions must be expressed, for to keep them bottled up inside can render one senseless and unbalanced. What better way to find release than through the age-old medium of poetry? 
          
          It is the author’s sincere hope that her poetry will bring solace to others who have endured the same tumultuous experiences with love and heartache. Perhaps the sharing of her words will provide healing for both the author and her readers around the world."
          
          
          http://www.amazon.com/So-This-Love-Collected-Poems-ebook/dp/B00IXXXT9K/
          
          Available in Paperback and Kindle edition.