My name is Emma and I'm 15 years old. I'm really nerdy, and I love to read. I am obsessed with Harry Potter and basically every other fandom out there. 
I am really into music, I play the clarinet and saxophone, and this basically consumes my life. I am also a ginger, hence the orangutan on my profile picture. I couldn't find one wearing glasses, so oh well.
Draco dormiens numquam titillandus. Follow me if you get this reference, and we can be buddies!!! :D

Critiquing

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Hey all!

I will critique up to 3 chapters as well as summaries. I mainly critique grammar and punctuation, but if I see any plot holes, or anything else that I think could be improved, I will comment on that too!

Payment is commenting once on my story Colosseum (it's not incredible, I admit. I have a lot more experience with reading and critiquing than I do with writing, and I could really use the help), and following me.

Please PM me the title of your story and the link as well as the chapters you want critiqued.As previously stated I will critique up to 3 chapters, but if your story is really good, I will read on for the fun of it.

I see this as critiquing for amateur writers, I am not super mean. I tell you the truth, but I am not scathing like some critics. If you want friendly advice, I am the critic for you!
:)
  • Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizadry
  • JoinedSeptember 17, 2014


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emma4eyes emma4eyes Nov 13, 2015 08:01AM
Hey guys! Thanks to all those who have followed me and voted on Colosseum recently. I just passed 10,000 reads - so exciting! I guess I'm going to have to apologise for my abominable lack of anything...
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