Hello!
I just came here to say that I’ve finished reading MGA, and honestly? It was such a wholesome story that I had to thank you for it.
I know the story was written like two or three years ago, but damn... there are so many positive things about it, things I rarely find on Wattpad since I joined in 2021.
First of all, the lack of exaggeration.
The MC had a tough past with his family, but I never saw him break down in front of everyone when he moved to Korea, not even once. He always tried to stay composed. Of course, he had angry and sad moments, and that’s absolutely normal.
What I usually see on Wattpad is:
The MC exposes his past, everyone around him pities him, then he immediately breaks down, and honestly, for me, that’s such a weak move.
Second: there was no rush at all.
The trainee/mentor relationship developed so well. Then they started falling in love, and did they start dating right away? Nope.
There was always something in the way. Then came the drama, then the reunion after five years... so good.
I also love the way you put effort into explaining the characters' actions even in the smallest dialogues, like when you describe what a character does after they finish talking: the gestures, the tone, the expressions. It made everything feel so much more immersive.
There’s a lot more I could say, but I think that’s enough. Just one last thing!
I really loved how wholesome the moments with Lisa turned out to be.
Sorry if my writing isn’t that good, English isn’t my first language, but I just had to come here and tell you how much I loved reading your story