dec302005

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Name:
          	Kairo D. Soryu (カイロ・D・蒼竜)
          	
          	Kairo – Japanese for “Sea Corridor,” 
          	
          	Soryu – “Azure Dragon,” 
          	
          	D. –  Cause why the fuck not
          	
          	Race: Lunarian
          	{Cause i want to write about another black mc, if you dont like it cope}
          	Template: Tobirama Senju (Naruto System)
          	Starting Age: 15
          	Spawn Point: Little Garden, 4 years before canon
          	
          	Starting Stats (System Interface)
          	[Warning: Lunarian racial bonuses detected }
          	
          	His baseline stats are high, since he is a Lunarien he start up pretty strong, but let say, most people in east blue will not be able to deal much damage to him.
          	
          	Starting Abilities
          	(Beginner but with high growth rate)
          	
          	Lunarian Flame Control – Defensive & offensive flame bursts, limited flight.
          	
          	Tobirama’s Water Style – Level 1 (Water Bullet, Water Whip, Water Clone).
          	
          	Basic Sensory Jutsu – Detect lifeforms within 50m.
          	
          	Enhanced Body Flicker – Extreme short-distance speed bursts.
          	
          	Survivor’s Instinct – Automatically calculates quickest kill or escape route.
          	
          	Water affinity-
          	
          	Space time ninjutsu affinity-
          	
          	{I will leave this here see the reaction it get to decide if its worth binging one piece or not}

ZDKexotic

Interesting all your story’s good tbh but lowkey feels weird to see a lunarian with water powers we finna see tho
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Rageparadox

I would read, sounds interesting. ;)
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Davtach

@dec302005 gotcha anyway it was the nerd emoji
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dec302005

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Name:
          Kairo D. Soryu (カイロ・D・蒼竜)
          
          Kairo – Japanese for “Sea Corridor,” 
          
          Soryu – “Azure Dragon,” 
          
          D. –  Cause why the fuck not
          
          Race: Lunarian
          {Cause i want to write about another black mc, if you dont like it cope}
          Template: Tobirama Senju (Naruto System)
          Starting Age: 15
          Spawn Point: Little Garden, 4 years before canon
          
          Starting Stats (System Interface)
          [Warning: Lunarian racial bonuses detected }
          
          His baseline stats are high, since he is a Lunarien he start up pretty strong, but let say, most people in east blue will not be able to deal much damage to him.
          
          Starting Abilities
          (Beginner but with high growth rate)
          
          Lunarian Flame Control – Defensive & offensive flame bursts, limited flight.
          
          Tobirama’s Water Style – Level 1 (Water Bullet, Water Whip, Water Clone).
          
          Basic Sensory Jutsu – Detect lifeforms within 50m.
          
          Enhanced Body Flicker – Extreme short-distance speed bursts.
          
          Survivor’s Instinct – Automatically calculates quickest kill or escape route.
          
          Water affinity-
          
          Space time ninjutsu affinity-
          
          {I will leave this here see the reaction it get to decide if its worth binging one piece or not}

ZDKexotic

Interesting all your story’s good tbh but lowkey feels weird to see a lunarian with water powers we finna see tho
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Rageparadox

I would read, sounds interesting. ;)
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Davtach

@dec302005 gotcha anyway it was the nerd emoji
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dec302005

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Something I wish to add here, for the Aizen story, as far I am aware the author note were already written it like when the chapter was made, so if there is a freaky comment just know it was written while the Sora story was still going and I saw some freaky shit and was like yeah, let match that rnergy, I also wish to add back then I used to write 10 if not 20 chapter daily, do not ask me why, I was motivated.
          
          Yes I issue this statement because I know for a fact some truly freaky ass comment going to be shown later from chapter 100 forward, and as to why I won’t delete them, some of them contain actual hints to how stuff play out and I forgot which and I ain’t willing to play Russian roulettes with this.
          
          So yay.
          
          I publicly denounce any freakiness which may be shown and I am not affiliated with any of them.

Davtach

@dec302005 dunno this will be recorded in the files probably
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dec302005

@Dantyv I am innocent I swear
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Dantyv

@dec302005  Do not worry, author. This piece of information will be taken onto account when we bring you to court.
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Iceprince234x

if you have see  fairy tail i have eh idea for eh oc  if oyu make eh stories i was thinkig be in lamia scale and the love interested be kaguya his magic be  like bakuya from bleach  or if you have seing seint seiya  Aquarius Camus with magic water and ice what do you think of that idea

Iceprince234x

@dec302005  Also what sqad captain will be and how long he will be  in years also what do you think to be the most respected one afdter yamamoto
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Iceprince234x

@dec302005  what  
            so you like the idea
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Mrblack255

Good afternoon, @7qwsa. I hope you are having a good day. I have a question: have you watched Dandadan? I hope so-it's peaks if you can get past all the weird stuff that goes on. And if so, would you be willing to do a fanfic in the future?
          ?

Mrblack255

Thank you for responding to my comment
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Mrblack255

I totally understand your choice not to watch it. I do understand it's not for everybody.
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Mrblack255

It's a fire emoji
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dec302005

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Y’all okay with me splitting Keitaro final part into smaller part cause it’s a pain in the ass to edit cause shit way to fucking long, and Grammarly along side chat gpt ass refuse to help, for Grammarly to many words….dont know how, and for chat gpt to many slurs, like come the Kenjaku parties weren’t that bad…….

BajeiBoi

@dec302005 when I use GPT to edit I replace all of the swears/slurs with place holders and then type them all back in manually.
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Davtach

@dec302005 bro is beyond cooked on this one
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BajeiBoi

Hey bro, I was wondering if you had any advice for writing a Naruto story. I’ve been enjoying yours a lot, I especially love that it takes place in a different time period than the show. I was thinking about making my character a part of Kakashi’s era, but it feels a little daunting to just try and come up with my own original events. If you have any tips, I’d love to hear them.
          
          Also, love the Quincy book, tryna get like you fr with mine 

dec302005

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@BajeiBoi i would recommend doing long time skip or not mentioning the year at all, let the reader guess some Naruto nerds(as in people who know a shit tone about it) will assume the date and probably be right, as for birth skip those stuff mostly give estimate this is what I have been doing in the story, not once did you see me say a character actual age, mostly estimate especially with Tsunade Mito and other people.
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BajeiBoi

@Davtach The Naruto wiki is about to have me in a chokehold
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dec302005

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Wow, reach 1k, that happened faster than I expected, and to think I got there by writing goddam goofy ass story I used to share with my sister, fun fact I probably wouldn’t be a writer if she didn’t enter a phase where she didn’t want to do that shit no more.
          
          
          I will never explain to my parents how writing about the Danzo List and Diddymaru are the reason I sleep late.
          
          Anyway thanks for the support.
          
          As for the 1k special, the choice is tuff.
          
          Could be the fullbring story.
          
          Could be the Overhaul story.
          
          
          Or maybe a one piece story just to finish the big 3 up.
          
          As for his power….its a system, a ninja system….his first pull his Minato and he join the straw hats on the island of giant, where they met Brogy and dodgy.
          
          Since he is a ninja….i can see Luffy ass making him join.
          
          As for my knowledge of one piece I watched the whole cake arc, some gear 5 shit, egghead, and the giant motherland, I did get enough shit to explain his power but if you are expecting some dip shit, it ain’t happening, I feel like at this point it should be common knowledge the first story is always the test.
          
          
          Or ten Shadow in Mushoku, being an adopted child of the Greyrat family, I still deeply despire Rudeus character but oh well.
          
          
          Anyway, I thank you all, wish you all get a Jane Doe wife.
          
          Sasuke is 100% one of those children on the Orochimaru list….Jiraya on it to….so is the third.
          
          Have a nice day

Davtach

@dec302005 I would ideally also like if u made up the morning tiger's ability
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Davtach

@dec302005 I actually can't see the emoji interesting 
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dec302005

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I will, I know for a fact I will post a ten shadow story, I don’t care if it’s a Genshin,Mushikoto Tenseigan,Bleach or one piece, one of these day I will write that shit and there is nothing no can do to stop me about it, in the meanwhile Finishing Keitaro story, I will probably have a special on Whag If Sukuna fought this cast….spoiler…..he dies….he get brutally molested so I might have to buff and do tricks on it more than Gege

depshot1090

@dec302005 tbh 10 shadows in genshin or like that 1 guy said mushoku tensei sound really interesting and maybe really fun to write since you can do many things with it. Writing this make me so angry that the bum megumi didnt do anything cool with it, I will keep slandering megumi to the end of time.
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Jangophett48

@dec302005 genshin cuz it's been a while
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