Cool! I’m really into Anakin too. Lol. :) ❤️ I guess I wish someone had explained more about “showing” vs “telling” too me.
Example:
1: Anakin sighs heavily.
2: His chest heaves out a weary sigh, muscles already aching from overexertion.
Idk. Just something like that. Lol.
Good luck on your fic! ❤️