dalisjinx

Hey, not dead. Still writing. just beefing with wi-fi and my Life settings.
          	
          	Small Things Update coming soon. No worries.
          	
          	9 Mil. is still in progress but it's coming.
          	
          	Both will have an A/N explaining a couple things for each story. (separate from the chapter of course for those who aren't gonna read it.)

1randomweeb

@dalisjinx oh my, you're alive
          	  
          	  HUZZAHHH
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no_green_tea

I am enjoying The Heart Is A World Of Small Things way more than planned. Kudos to you for making me invested and for testing my emotional capability with a fan fiction of an anime I barely watched. 
          I might binge vote later when I'm not too caught up with what happens next, or if make it to your latest chapter. 

dalisjinx

Hey, not dead. Still writing. just beefing with wi-fi and my Life settings.
          
          Small Things Update coming soon. No worries.
          
          9 Mil. is still in progress but it's coming.
          
          Both will have an A/N explaining a couple things for each story. (separate from the chapter of course for those who aren't gonna read it.)

1randomweeb

@dalisjinx oh my, you're alive
            
            HUZZAHHH
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FUDGEHELLOS

Hello, I am a very new writer and just posted my very first book. Your book, The Heart Is a World of Small Things, inspired me to make my on My Hero Academia book. I was wondering if you can give some tips about my book and tell me what I can change? If you can't that is A okay . 
          
          Thank you so much for letting me take sometime out of your day. 
            Also I Love ur book

dalisjinx

@FUDGEHELLOS Hi! I appreciate you enjoying Heart of Small Things and it inspiring you to start writing. Though I believe I’m still not in any position to be giving out tips and advice regarding writing I can offer a few tips.
            
            I can’t tell you to change something about your story because it is yours. Play around with words and see what sticks and what doesn’t. If things don’t make sense go back 5 sentences or a paragraph, the beginning of the chapter or even from the very top. It’ll take time and practice to notice a couple things. When you're done or if you're stuck, leave it alone and come back to it a couple hours/days later.
            
            Also don’t feel pressured about finishing an idea. You can save it for another time and maybe even make it a small arc in your future works.
            
            I’m really happy my work has inspired you.
            Best wishes, Dalis
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