dae_ash

Hello to the stories that I will be criticizing! I am excited to check all of your works, correct, and give you advices. I am not a pro at judging, but I will apply all the things I've learned from others, from past competitions, and from myself. Good luck to each and one of you! @charlemarila @rantoska @Jacefiel @LostMegumi

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akosiRenka

This is NOT a common story of a poor girl and a rich boy that fight  for the name of LOVE...
          
          Ano bang dapat i-description dito? HAHAHA. 
          Year 2013 pa ito.  Isa ito sa mga pinakamatagal na istorya dito sa mundo ng manunulat.  
          Sana sa taong ito ay makasama ka na sa pagsubaybay ng istoryang ito at maging masaya sana ang mga bida sa huli.  
          Kaya sana sa pitong taon na pagsama nyo dito matagpuan na natin ang huling pahina ng istorya at kung baguhan ka palang na nagbabasa nito, sana samahan mo sila hanggang sa huli. At salamat *insert smiley*
          
          https://my.w.tt/cgipjaDVOab

IcylnSnowy

Hi! Sorry for plugging. I would like to promote my stories. Just check my profile anytime. Reads, comments and votes are highly appreciated. I'll support your story too! Keep writing! Hope you follow me back. Good bless! 

IcylnSnowy

sureee! I'll read it now then I'll vote later. Bawal pa 'ko mag vote eh. napadami na ata navote ko
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dae_ash

@IcylnSnowy Thank you! I hope you'll read Missing The Edge, too. 
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lumierezi

hi! hope u can try my novel, You Let Me Drown. about a girl who is too ambitious, and a boy who wants someone to stay. if u love bad boy vibes, and beach settings and cloy, u might love it. it would mean so much to see your comments and hear your thoughts! thanks♡
          https://my.w.tt/BWkyfwwGN6

dae_ash

@lumierezi will add it to my reading list. hope you'd read missing the edge, too. thank you for sharing your work! <3
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