cute_kathren

Happy New Years!!!! I hope you all are having a great night with joy.  
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          	2016!!!!!!!
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bailal1

Hey can u plz check out my book? Thank u!

bailal1

@cute_kathren thanks for the help!
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cute_kathren

@bailal1 I read it now and is sounds really interesting the the words you use make the story strong. I would say that  you start each sentence with the and then a lot and I think that it would make the story sound better if you put in other words so it sounds better. overall it sounds so so good and I would love to read more.;-)
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cute_kathren

Hey guys, so I started to look over the chapters that I have posted and realized that I had a lot of mistakes. And that I wrote things that I am not really happy with. Can't believe I missed all those mistakes. Anyways I fixed, took out, added things to chapters 1-7. So please read them because they will make the next few chapters make sense much better. I published chapter 8!!!!!!!! Please vote and comment. 
          
                 C.K