RogoMima
Hey, thank you for the follow! ^^ I'm happy you enjoy my work, hope to finish it and then start some heavy editing as I've been ignoring it.
I think your writing is interesting but you need to first figure out who you want to read your story and what you want to express with it. Then just have fun experimenting and trying things as you express your ideas. Never say your writing is terrible, you should be the first and most loyal supporter of your own writing.
