choolwe mwenda

Hi everyone, I know it's been a really long time since I posted something. For that I am sorry.
          I have been working on something that I finished not so long ago. I tried editing it myself and it was hard so I tried looking for an editor. That didn't go too well, but I think my latest piece is okay.
          I know it has a few errors in it but do read it, it's actually pretty good.
          It's about something that caught my attention, something that I myself have gone through that people don't give enough attention.
          I wrote this in hopes that it would motivate and help someone going through something hard.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/267508959

Hello everyone, I'm back and I will try to give you a few new chapters.
          
          But first I want to do some proof reading and editing just to make sure everything is okay. There maybe some changes made to some of the chapters but I will keep the them of my story.
          
          One of the changes will be in chapter 1, James will be altered a little bit but there won't be too huge a difference I promise.
          
          I would really appreciate it if you could share my work and give a meaningful comment.
          
          Also some good news, I've been approached by someone who likes what I have written so far and would like to post it on a pay to read site. Tell me what you think about that 

Good evening everyone. I have some sad news for all my followers. (The 4 of you whom I love so much lol) 
          
          For the next few months I will not be able to update my book because I will be studying. But as soon as I am done I will be back to all of you and promise to give you a great new chapter.
          
          But while I am gone I would like to ask that you share the work I have done so far with others and leave a critique which I will see and reply to as soon as I get back. You can be as harsh as you need to be because your critiques will help improve my writing.
          
          Even though I will be away, know that I love you all and wish you all the best in your own projects and lives.
          
          Until we meet again stay safe and stay creative. 

Finished working on the fifth chapter and starting work on the sixth. Writing is no easy task. So if I take long to finish a chapter please bear with me. My dream is to one day become a great auther and I will achieve that dream. 

At long last I have finished the fourth chapter of defending paradise. I sincerely apologise for the delayed completion. It has been a difficult chapter to write because it hasn't really included any of my favorite characters. But it had to be included in order to show everyone where James came from. I hope you enjoy it. J tried to keep it a little interesting. The next chapter will be out soon too so keep watching. 

Thanks for the follow ❤️

So I've had a busy few days dealing with some personal things, I haven't had time to finish the latest chapter of descending Paradise. I'll be done with it sometime tomorrow, but please forgive me and stay tuned.

So I just got more than 50 views for my first story. I won't disappoint those of you reading my work. I will give you a complete masterpiece very soon. 

I had to change the title of  my book due to some conflict... 

I will upload the next chapter in the next few days. But before I do please give me your thoughts on the second chapter.