I'm sure my next piece won't let you down. I got a bit hooked and read it quickly. I think your writing is brilliant. It nearly inspired me to write too, just to feel that joy of reading your work. I know I sound like a fanboy, but your character descriptions are outstanding, they felt like real, living people. They were silky smooth. You could expand all this into a comic or manga series later, if you choose to. If you ever want to reach me about this story, I'd happily chat on Insta: clairecozyy Just never stop writing.